Okay, so for those of you who have been with me for several years now know that I've been working on an idea forever. I've changed it up so many times I've lost count. I've decided to try it again; again, rewriting it from scratch.
Sorry if it's annoying anyone. So, today I'm releasing Chapter 1 as a promise that I really am working on it. However, after writing Chapter 1, I got a brand new idea. So, I started the same story … again … but a completely different approach. I'm only about a half-way through that chapter, but I wanted to share both with you so see which one you like better. So enjoy the two Chapter 1's and leave a comment or vote on my Facebook page which one you like better. Enjoy P.S. Keep in mind that these are just rough drafts. Please focus more on the content of the story rather than grammatical mistakes.
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Lauren Shurtz
11/19/2018 07:30:57 pm
That is super good! thanks!
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McKayla Allgood
12/7/2018 05:36:21 pm
I personally liked option #1 more than #2. Although, my younger sister that is into fantasies read them both, and liked option #2 more. However, she wished that there was more backstory in the second one instead of just jumping right into it. They were both really good though.
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